[eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik

[afinevoice]

Hi Lynette,

Forging Ahead https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3 and Basil and Cleopatra https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3 have been uploaded

Hey, to let you know: When I try to download 23, "Basil and Cleopatra," from the MW, nothing downloads and the link yeilds a 404 error.

Hi Lynette, I've uploaded Ch 23 "Basil and Cleopatra" again. I can hear it. I must have messed it up last time. https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3

[LCaulkins]

Story 17, "Basil: The Freshest Boy," is PL OK

Looks like a whole streak of stories with the same character!

- and I've traded out the old URL for the new on 23 - works like a charm now, and it's added into my queue

[LCaulkins]

Story 18, "He Thinks He's Wonderful," is PL OK

[afinevoice]

Story 17, "Basil: The Freshest Boy," is PL OK

Looks like a whole streak of stories with the same character!

- and I've traded out the old URL for the new on 23 - works like a charm now, and it's added into my queue

thanks for your kind assistance

[afinevoice]

Hi Lynette,
I've uploaded Ch 26 Majesty https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3

45 reads to go

[LCaulkins]

Story 19, "Outside the Cabinet Maker's" and Story 20, "The Captured Shadow," are both PL OK

And both of those were cute.

26 added to my queue

[LCaulkins]

Hey, Adrian - Scott sends his compliments. He overheard me listening to the last two stories, and says, "That's a very pleasant reading voice to listen to."

On story 21, at 43:34, I noticed a repeat of "now" at end of that sentence.

[LCaulkins]

Story 22, "Forging Ahead," is PL OK

[afinevoice]

thanks Lynette

[LCaulkins]

Story 23, "Basil & Cleopatra," and Story 24, "The Last of the Belles," are both PL OK

And I did not notice anything annoying in 23. Being quite familiar with your voice, I could tell on 22 and that one that your voice was off its norm, but nothing was the least bit off-putting in either one.

[afinevoice]

great, 'cause I'd hate to have to record them again!

[LCaulkins]

On Story 25, "Rough Crossing," there is one long pause at 23:06 that needs to be trimmed. Everything otherwise is perfectly happy.

Story 26, "Majesty," is PL OK

And now I've caught up to you.

[afinevoice]

oh no, i've let it slide a bit recently, I guess I'll have to start work again!

[afinevoice]

Hi Lynette,
I have uploaded a new story At Your Age https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3

I hope I've fixed the 2 bugs as well

[LCaulkins]

Hi, Adrian


Story 21, "The Perfect Life," is PL OK now

Story 25, "The Rough Crossing," still has that super long pause

In Story 17, "At Your Age," there is a spot where "Annie" slipped into "Andy", in this sentence starting at 17:30 (and while you have the file open for editing, it might be nice to amplify the volume a couple decibels so it's not noticeably softer than your other sections) -

'"Wasn't she terrible?" said Annie, breathing aloud.

[afinevoice]

Hi Lynette,
I've uploaded The Swimmers https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3 for PL

[afinevoice]

Hi Lynette,
I've uploaded Two Wrongs https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3

Let's hope there's less than that

41 stories to read I think!

[LCaulkins]

Story 28, "The Swimmers," is PL OK

And both "Rough Crossing" and "At Your Age" are both happy now, too.

(Two Wrongs is on tap)

[afinevoice]

thanks Lynette, really appreciate all your hard work

[LCaulkins]

Story 29, "Two Wrongs," is PL OK