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Re: solo [english] The Well of Loneliness by Radcylffe Hall - vik

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Chapter 15 is ready for spot pl. I have corrected the pronunciation error. https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... 5_hall.mp3

However, I went to fix this one but I couldn't find an missing text. Perhaps I fixed it and forgot I had done so :shock:

22.55-22.57
...she felt his si-[des swell with a vast, resigned sigh; heard the creaking of damp girth leather as he sighed because he had understood her. For the love of the chase was still hot in Raftery, the love of splendid, unforeseen danger, the love of crisp mornings and frost-bound evenings, and of long, dusky roads that always led home. He was wise with the age-old wisdom of the beasts, it is] true, but that wisdom...
A bit of the paragraph seems to have been clipped in the editing, I’m guessing (?).
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16 and 17 are also ready for spot pl :)

Chapter 19 is ready for PL :D
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Chapters 15, 16 and 17 are spot PL OK. I'm not sure quite what happened with chapter 15, but the main thing is that it's resolved itself!

Chapter 19 is PL OK. Have a good week!
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Chapter 20 is PL OK. Have a fantastic weekend!
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Chapter 21 is PL OK. Two notes for chapter 22 below. I'll get on to chapter 23 soon!

9.07-9.16, omission
For she thought that she glimpsed through the dust of the years, a faint flicker [of the girl who had lingered] in the lanes when the young man Williams and she had been courting.

10.02-10.09, false start
Beggin' your pardon, it would Beggin' your pardon, it would 'urt Arth-thur's feelin's to be made to sit down...
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Two notes for chapter 23. I hope your week's going well!

The file name has an extra (third) L in ‘well’, so it’s being alphabetised/sorted ahead of all the other chapters

16.01-16.04, check pronunciation
...it was called the Potomac River.
https://www.lexico.com/definition/potomac
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Chapters 24 - 27 are ready for PL :)
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Great! It's nice to hear more, even if it's pretty clear the way this episode is going to turn out...

I've noted a few things, but it's up to you what you'd like to change.

Chapter 24

In the tags, the chapter number is showing 25


Chapter 25

Intro has a false start
This Legamus recording- This Legamus recording may be distributed and adapted freely for any purpose.

2.43-3.03, check pronunciation + quite minor word change
And the fact that this God, in a thoughtless moment, had created in His turn those pitiful thousands who must stand for ever outside His blessing, would in no way disturb the large congregation or [heard of] their white surpliced pastor, or the couple who knelt on the gold-braided, red velvet cushions.
https://www.lexico.com/definition/surpliced

4.25-4.27
Yet could Stephen [heard Stephen could] have known it...
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Chapter 26 is PL OK!
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Chapter 27 is PL OK!
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Chapters 22 - 24 are ready for spot pl :D
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Chapters 22-24 are spot PL OK!
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Chapter 28 is PL OK.

I'm sorry for the delay. I got jabbed, which is thrilling, but it has slowed me down. I'm catching up as I stay in and wait for the full effect to kick in!

I hope your weekend is going well!
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The reading is fine, but there's a small note for chapter 29: In the tags there is a typo in the chapter number (Twnety).
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